写了一份英文简历,大家帮看看有没有什么词法语法错误?
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2002年12月21日 19:52:39
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School of Civil Engineering XXXX University of Technology XXXX,XXXX,China Dec 21,2002 Dept. of Human Resources XXXX Water Company XXXX,XXXX, China Dear Sir, I am writing in response to obtain a challenging position as a software/network/water supply/water treatment engineer with an emphasis in design and development. Next year I will receive a bachelor’s degree in water supply engineering. I believe that both my education and experience are directly related to your needs.

School of Civil Engineering
XXXX University of Technology
XXXX,XXXX,China
Dec 21,2002

Dept. of Human Resources
XXXX Water Company
XXXX,XXXX, China


Dear Sir,

I am writing in response to obtain a challenging position as a software/network/water supply/water treatment engineer with an emphasis in design and development. Next year I will receive a bachelor’s degree in water supply engineering. I believe that both my education and experience are directly related to your needs.

As an undergraduate, I have taken all the academic main courses and gain a great deal of practical expertise, I have finished the program of “Pineline Adjustment by Parameters” and “AGA”(Accelerated Genetic Algorithm). As a result, I can, at this point, perform most professional works with little or no difficulty.

Because my primary interest is in software and network development, besides taking courses of my major, I have taken many computer science courses such as Discrete Mathematic, Operation System, Data Structure etc. Nowaday, I can master various kinds of developer tools likes DELPHI, VASUAL BASIC, VASUAL C++ etc. I am familiar with several programming languages, for instance, C, C++, PHP, PASCAL, VB, FORTRAN and so on. I also have some development experience under UNIX and Linux environment. To be one of the main founders of XXX, I have been taking the main task of technology development and support.

I would appreciate the opportunity to join your staff because your firm enjoys a reputation for helping students like me to exert ones strong suit in water supply fields. I enclose a resume and could be available for an interview at your convenience.


Sincerely yours,
XXXX
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mechine
2002年12月26日 17:51:32
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xxxx

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jackyu
2002年12月27日 14:45:58
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你的英语很不专业呀!
你学的是不是给排水呀municipal engineering!
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miggyding
2002年12月27日 17:54:50
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hehe,Good guy!I have no more time to read it carefully.a mistake: I have taken all the academic main courses and gain a great deal of practical expertise gain->gained
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n9a5x7
2002年12月29日 07:22:00
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我想你这不是一份简历,只是一封信而已。一般来说简历应该简洁明了,突出你的特点,让用人单位能一眼看到你就是他们所需要的。用word的简历格式吧,另外加一个cover letter.而Cover Letter 的目的是引起读信人对你的兴趣,引导他读
你的 Resume
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benq
2002年12月29日 12:17:21
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说错了,是求职信
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